26th October 2015 - Spooky Pros Story 26
Thursday, 29 October 2015 09:59 amOkay, take a good, dark, halloween-type idea - Bodie the demon, Bodie the devil, sent to steal Doyle's soul - and then saturate almost every sentence in the five page story with mush... and you have this fic. It could have been soooo good, but I just can't see the characterisation of lads almost hysterical* in their love for each other... *sighs sadly* On the other hand, I suppose that's a kind of scary idea in itself... *g*
(There's also nothing in this story that I can hang a picture on, there's just... no setting, somehow...)
*I know there are people who don't see dramatic declarations as non-Pros, and that this is just my ever-so-humble opinion, but... it's my opinion. *g*