Date: Friday, 6 August 2010 12:35 pm (UTC)
I could (and to myself will *g*) quibble about errors and typos and a bit too much telling in places that (for me) deflates the intensity
Ah, but you've said it out loud to us now as well, so please do explain where you reckon it does this - always interesting to chat about fic!
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Hold Your Breath, Sunshine


A ship is safe in the harbour - but that's not what ships are for.

~o~

I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night. (Sarah Williams)

~o~

Could've.
Should've.
Would've.
Didn't. Didn't. Didn't.

~o~

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