Pros fic rec - Daring the Sea by Bistokidsfan

[byslantedlight]

I know I've recced this before, elsewhere, but it came up while I was randoming at Circuit Archive over coffee, and I still like it alot... *g*

Daring the Sea by Bistokidsfan

I love that it's a story for grown-ups too - Bistokidsfan doesn't tell us anything, she shows us all the way, and although it doesn't get into complexities we know that everyone concerned is dealing with proper, grown-up situations and emotions and psyches...

Comments

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

I could (and to myself will *g*) quibble about errors and typos and a bit too much telling in places that (for me) deflates the intensity
Ah, but you've said it out loud to us now as well, so please do explain where you reckon it does this - always interesting to chat about fic!