Pros Icon Drabbles - for Firlefanzine - Happiness

[byslantedlight]

Happiness
The sun shone warm on the flat white paving stones, soaked into Bodie's bones, his blood, his dreams. He woke slowly, revelling in it, in the fact that there was no one shooting at them, no one shouting for them, and there was another twelve days of just the same to come. He stretched lazily, feeling sleepy, cat-like.

Beside him Doyle dozed on his stomach, face half buried in the angle of his arms, and Bodie's gaze wandered across his shoulders, down the line of his tanning back, and even further.

Holiday, and cream of his very own.

He smiled.

Comments

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

Doyle dozing on Bodie's tummy....oh, that's luverly, that is.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh heeee! It could read as if Doyle was dozing on Bodie's tummy, and oh he should have been if I'd thought of it! But I didn't - I meant that he was lying face-down... prone... on his own tummy... *headdesk*

I like your version though! *g*

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

Oh, sorreeeeee! I don't know what's wrong with me this last day or so, I keep reading what I *think* is there! Sorry. Anyway, it's lovely writing

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

God, yeah, sorry....you wrote 'beside him' - how could I have missed that? Freudian, I'll be bound (bound? even more Freudian..)

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Oh, you get better - Doyle lying on Bodie's stomach, bound... Keep going! *vbg

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Hee - that's okay! I did like your version! And thank you! *vbg*

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Now we're being treated to a bit of romance, I see. How sweet is that? Although I suppose you could say they're just mates. *g* Thanks!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Lol - well, I certainly didn't mean to imply that they were "just mates"... *g* And yeah - romance is what it's all about... of course I see them dying tragically together as romantic too, but hey ho! *vbg*

[callistosh65.livejournal.com]

Holiday, and cream of his very own. Wicked.... and wonderful.*g*

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Thank you! *g*

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

Oh, I'm so glad you let my cat alive!

And how sweet and romantic and cat-like you can be!
"...He stretched lazily, feeling sleepy..."
Thank you!
I love it!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Lol - there was no eating of the cat! *vbg*

Very glad you like it - yeay!

[moth2fic.livejournal.com]

One of the best yet. I love that last sentence!!

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Heee - thank you! *vbg*

[schnuffi.livejournal.com]

Oooooooh, nice description of Doyle's backside. No wonder Bodie enjoys their holiday so much. Also like it that Bodie does the cat-like stretch for once.

[byslantedlight.livejournal.com]

Lol! And Bodie is cat-like sometimes - a big, solid and sleek, lazy cat who's enjoying his world... *vbg*