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Just back from a morning's cobwebs (volunteering *g*) and came across this meme as done by [livejournal.com profile] fiorenza_a, and thought - fun! Pros post!

1. Go to page 7 (or 77) of your current WIP.
2. Go to line 7
3. Copy down the next 7 lines – sentences or paragraphs – and post them as they’re written.
Tag seven other people.

I did think I might have to adapt it to paragraph 7, cos blimey - but actually I do have one that hits 7 pages (and beyond, and I even had it out the other day, so:

Waters and the Wild WIP - page 7, for 7 lines after line 7.
Bodie's eyes widened as he watched it encase Doyle's entire body, disappearing between his buttocks, somehow stretching over his balls and even his cock and...

Patricks caught him staring. "The Skin does not bond with mucous membranes, it rather dissolves on continuous contact, allowing the body to... carry out its normal functionality. As most sex simulators are designed to mimic the human body for best... um... utility, this will appear entirely normal.

"Gosh, thanks," Doyle muttered, flexing and twitching within the Skin. He held up the final flap of circuitry. "And this?"

BD leaningontank2
o0o


Of course it turned out to be a slightly kinky sounding bit! *g* It's an AU crossover with Speilberg's Artificial Intelligence and I've been writing it for years... it's not even all that long (just under 32,000 words so far - which isn't 77 pages!)

I don't usually tag people, but maybe this time I will - anyone out there got a Pros WIP they could post 7-7-7? Maybe paragraph 7, line 7, the next 7 lines after that? Hmmn, who might have Pros WIPS...? *g* Maybe [livejournal.com profile] phantomas, [livejournal.com profile] heliophile_oxon, [livejournal.com profile] golden_bastet, [livejournal.com profile] msmoat, [livejournal.com profile] solosundance, [livejournal.com profile] jessebee, or [livejournal.com profile] merentha13? Or anyone else out there who fancies? *g* (Obviously making a post is entirely optional, and I always think tagging is a bit cheeky, but... wee bursts of Prosfic in my flist? )

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessebee.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness, I love the sound of your WIP!

Here's a bit from one of mine, now I have to come up with seven folks to tag, eh? And repost this in my LJ *g*.


Under Rug Swept

Bodie shifted up onto an elbow, dislodging Doyle's hand, and reached to sweep a thumb beneath his partner's eye, brushing away the wetness there. “Then …?”

“I'm happy, you cretin,” Doyle growled, and his surly, embarrassed tone was immediately reassuring. “I just never ….”

“Never what?” Bodie spread his hand across Doyle's chest, cataloguing the delightful feel of soft, springy hair catching at his fingers.

Doyle sniffed again and shrugged, or as much as he could while lying down.

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 05:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Oh, that was quick! And I'd say ooh yes, do post it separately, but I see you have... yeay! *g*

And awww - such a moment you've posted here -definitely need to read more of that one! *g*

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessebee.livejournal.com
And awww - such a moment you've posted here -definitely need to read more of that one! *g*

Thank you! Did I never show you this one?

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 06:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
I don't remember it... although I will grant you that doesn't really mean you've never shown it me - but I don't think so.. *g*

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessebee.livejournal.com
I shall inflict it upon you shortly *g*. Be warned, it's really rough!

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Got it, read it, would like more please... *g*

Date: Wednesday, 13 January 2016 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jessebee.livejournal.com
Shall try! *g*

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 04:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorenza-a.livejournal.com
I'm liking the kinky bit - I do have a number of Pros WIP, so just for you, from one I've nearly finished 7-7-7:

''Six pounds, I've been dodging the doctor.''

''Look mate, you're not going to get out of attending the check ups. Cowley's made it mandatory.''

Doyle looked morose ''I know. Wily Old Bastard's got a chart. Gave me a scotch and tore me off a strip when it was only four pounds, but I can't keep it on and train at the same time.''

Bodie got up, went to one of his cupboards, took something out and deposited it in front of Doyle ''Allow me to introduce you to my friend, Mr Mars Bar.''

Doyle looked up from studying the offering to protest ''You must be joking. I want to put on weight, not have a heart attack.''

''Yeah, well, when you start putting on weight you can elbow them, until then, after every meal, mate.''

''What about me teeth?''
Edited Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 04:17 pm (UTC)

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 05:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Ah, you do have Pros WIPs as well as the other ones you've been posting! And interesting... hee, ...me teeth! *g*

I have WIP coming out of the wazoo !

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 06:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorenza-a.livejournal.com
I listed the totals and me most pressing projects on day twenty-nine of me November 30 Days thingy (if you're curious).

I have five of them sat as drafts on AO3 right now and am working on one of the not-on-AO3 ones as we speak.

This one is a sort of case fic and I've had quite bit of fun writing it.

I have loads of WIP over seven pages. I rotate them until they get finished. Some languish more than others. I must say other folks WIP are whetting me appetite...

RE: I have WIP coming out of the wazoo !

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 08:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Looks like you have much to be going on with, and you sound very efficient about it! Shall look forward to the Pros stories...

RE: I have WIP coming out of the wazoo !

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorenza-a.livejournal.com

You might like some of them, I'm not a very romantic person writer. Jessebee's sounds like a real saga and my mind is still boggling from yours!

I can't the image out of mind or where that last flap of circuitry is going :0)

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 06:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com
Oh my, you made me laugh so hard! I'm looking forward to the whole story!

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 07:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fiorenza-a.livejournal.com

That's what I keep think about everybody else's (well, perhaps not the laughing bit!) :0)

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] solosundance.livejournal.com
Ooh I've been tagged! *looks proudly at tag*

Will see what I can find :D

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 05:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
You has been tagged! And yeay for things to find - I shall keep an eye out... *vbg*

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 08:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] msmoat.livejournal.com
Why is it that it's always the kinky bits that turn up in these things? *g*

Sounds intriguing, your story does.

Hmm. I do have a Pros WIP, since I started it for DIALJ and then didn't finish it in time. It's not 7 pages, but I'm sure it's more than 7 paragraphs. I think....

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 08:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Hee - it does seem to work out that way... *g* And oh good - shall keep my eye out! *vbg* (I must admit I looked at the meme and thought 7 pages or 77 pages - those are impressive WIPs! *g*)

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 10:15 pm (UTC)
ext_5650: Six of my favourite characters (not dead 'm writing)
From: [identity profile] phantomas.livejournal.com
Mine is here : )

https://phantomas.dreamwidth.org/400068.html

(don't know what's wrong with my pc and formatting tonight , sorry!)

Date: Tuesday, 12 January 2016 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Yeay! *runs to look*

Date: Wednesday, 13 January 2016 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heliophile-oxon.livejournal.com
Oh, you know I'm looking forward to this so much!!!! *bg*

I don't think I'll tag anyone, but here's a 7-7-7 of something that's sitting on my hard drive ...

Bodie took his arm the last few meters to the transport point and keyed in what was clearly a priority request, as a two-person vehicle was delivered only minutes later. Doyle let exhaustion take him as Bodie input his details, only wondering slightly at his preference for controlling the vehicle himself rather than letting it run on automatic as most people did. Bodie clearly preferred higher speeds to those permitted by the standard automatic controls, and Doyle noted absently as he drifted off that he must have the necessary clearance to override them … yes, he thought, CI5 has all sorts of privileges …

And somewhere else on the hard drive:
But this time luck had not been on their side. This time they'd been a shade too overconfident, perhaps, counting on their ability to talk down or intimidate the three nondescript, incongruously white-coated figures they'd found after eventually tracking the purchase and supply of certain chemicals to an entirely unofficial but rather well-equipped laboratory. One of whom was currently holding a gun jammed hard against Ray's spine at chest-height, with trembling hands.

He willed Bodie to move, to take out the sole gunman and disable the other two. He'd be dead before he knew it, but at least Bodie could … but he knew Bodie wouldn't.

Date: Tuesday, 19 January 2016 09:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
Oh, I'm sorry - I read this and didn't comment at the time, even though - Heliophile WIP! And... AU sci-fi Heliophile WIP? I'm so intrigued! Maybe we can work out some kind of trade with The Waters and the Wild... *vbg*

Date: Wednesday, 13 January 2016 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] golden-bastet.livejournal.com
Ooh - meme!

I can't do the current WIP, because it likely will be my BB. I can't do the story before that, because it's similar enough to the current WIP to be a spoiler.

Hmmm - I know which one will work here... :off to find that story:

Date: Tuesday, 19 January 2016 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] byslantedlight.livejournal.com
And I didn't comment here, cos I think I spotted the WIP and commented there - but I shall say again, yeay and thank you! *g*

Hold Your Breath, Sunshine


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~o~

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~o~

Could've.
Should've.
Would've.
Didn't. Didn't. Didn't.

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