Reading Pros fic - Harlequin Airs by Ellis Ward
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Harlequin Airs by Ellis Ward Bodie and Doyle run away to join the circus... well, not quite, but as the blurb at Palelyloitering says, this is an "
I've read this zine before of course, many times, and I do like it. Doyle is pretty much Doyle - albeit a rather hurting Doyle - and Bodie is pretty much Bodie, and together they're quite them, albeit in leotards. *g* The story works nicely - it goes from one end to the other, with enough pace in between to keep you reading - and it's all pretty believable to me. Well, you know, in a running-off-to-join-the-circus kind of way. *g*
If I had to niggle, I could wish the beta-reader had caught a few of the not-quite correct Britisms (being beaten up is being done over, not done up, which is what you are when you put on your best gear and make-up!) But they were little enough that they made me blink rather than wince. And perhaps the characters were all a bit too understanding of each other, and some difficulties a little too easily overcome (Doyle beats up someone for calling him a poof, and the someone just says "oh okay then" and they're friends after? Hmmn!) but maybe that's just being being more cynical about the world than the author.
In general - a good fun read, about the lads and CI5, and with the magic of the circus thrown in, and definitely worth it! If you can get hold of a paper zine copy, it's even more worth it to turn the pages and see Lovett's drawings of our lads throughout.
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